A snake is like
a piece of spaghetti
with eyes, slithering on the ground.
It feels as smooth as
a goldfish
a baby's skin
or sand on the beach.
The snake's hiss sound like
a gentle breeze
blowing in the trees.
When it slithers on the ground
it looks like the letter S.
Snakes! Snakes! ssssssssssssssss...
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What a great poem!
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Devin
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ReplyDeleteMrs. Witt's class, that poem is so descriptive, I can just about see the snake slithering towards me! Great job!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Witt's class, what a wonderful and descriptive poem, makes you feel like your right outside seeing it for yourself. Great job
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